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Auteur du poème : raya
Date de publication : 02/09/07
Type de poème : Tristesse
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love and hatred

i never said i love you
nore have u said it to
we migth as well admit that you hate me and i hate you
seing you beside me makes me suffer
why should we live in vain??in horror
i am focusing on our relationship
but their is no chemestrey,no friendship
between us it's shallow
between us it is nothing but hallow
the gap that seperates us is groing
their is a clowed of hatred flowing
just admit that we are not ment to be together
admit that our lives will seperate one day or another
but this is how i say goodbye
and that's when i start to cry
when i cry does it mesn anything?
should i worry about still havinf fealings or something?
why should i cry when i know
that deep down you are gonna go
i will work on my depression
stop thinking about you and learn a lesson
from know on i believe
that in my heart will always lie grief


 

Ecrit par justine le 08/09/07
very good idea ! congratulations !
very good job !
Ecrit par Alexandra le 05/09/07
... i think it's the better than i have read in this site !! very good job !

 


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